a.k.a The Crumbling Man, not because it matches events in the story, but I think it’s a nifty title.
Pulled a few late nights and early mornings and have finally finished a rough draft. It reads well, but doesn’t seem to cohere as much as I’d hoped. I fear I may have to change the beginning so it better matches the finish, and then perform some major surgery to the middle.
But it’s finished, so that’s half the battle won.